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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i'm learning english, becasuse i want to go to many country and want to meet people around the world.
i grew up in japan and now i'm university student and i play water polo in japan.
my hobby is taking the photo. so i want to go to abroad and take the photo.
and my dream is that become a photographer. and i also like watching the sports. especially national team match because their games is exciting than other games.

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm learning English because I want to visit different countries and to meet people around the world.
    I grew up in Japan, I'm a university student and I play water polo.
    My hobby is taking photos, so I want to go abroad to take different ones.

    My dream is to become a photographer. I also like watching sports especially the national team matches because their games are more exciting than other games.

     

    (I'm not a native English speaker so maybe there are other mistakes)

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