Hello,everyone!

Hello,everyone!

Hello,(space here after the comma) everyone! These days, I get (Use the present if you are still recieving it.  Also, most people would say get instead of recieve but that's just word choice) a lot from italki and by skype, I have (Use perfect) made some friends like Chris, Ande (captialize names), and others (Most people would just say others because you already said that they were friends).  (Two spaces at the end of a sentence)Now I'm grateful to italki for all of these.
I love English and I hope that more people can become my language partner and we can study together.
Thank you for reading. (Most people would just say this)
My SKYPE name :Shao Johnson.

If you remember the space after the comma and two spaces after the period, you are well on your way.  Most of your errors here are just mastering how people talk and not the language.  There are two tense errors based on what time period you are talking about, but great job.