Women must do makeup?

Women must do makeup?

Must women wear makeup?

I read some books about women’s lives, the boring writers try to teach

I read some books about women’s lives; the boring writers try to teach

woman how to live a better life. Almost every book emphasize the makeup.

women how to live a better lives. Almost every book emphasizes the makeup.

They said, because woman ‘s youth is very short, so young woman need to be

They say because a woman‘s youth is very short, so young woman need to be

more beautiful, a pretty face can help them find a good job and husband.

more beautiful; a pretty face can help them find a good job and a husband.

It is like a business. Sucks. 

It is like marketing one's self. (It really sucks!) 

But they said, well, this is still a male society,

But they reasoned:  Well, this is still a male dominated society; 

it’s woman’s duty to make up and wear high heeled shoes. 

it’s a woman’s duty to wear make up and wear high heel shoes.

Why? Makeup and high heeled shoes harm to health both.

Why? Makeup and high heel shoes do harm to a woman's health.

If a man like a woman with thick makeup,

If a man desires/likes a woman with heavy makeup,

why he doesn’t marry a eye liner or eye black?

why doesn’t he marry a tube of black eye liner or red lipstick?**funny :)***

Why career women must wear high heeled shoes and do makeup

Why must career women must still wear high heel shoes and do makeup

to work as the basic politeness?

to work as a minimum requirement?

Must women use makeup?

I read some books about women’s lives by boring writers that try to teach woman how to live a better life. Almost every book emphasize the makeup. They said, because women‘s youth is very short, they need to be more beautiful because a pretty face can help them find a good job and a husband.
It is like a business. Sucks!
But they said, well, this is still a male society; it’s woman’s duty to use makeup and wear high-heeled shoes.
Why? Makeup and high heeled shoes both harm women's health. 

If a man likes a woman with thick makeup, why doesn’t he marry an eye liner or a black eye?
Why must career women must wear high-heeled shoes and do makeup to work as a form of basic politeness?

That was quite a strong essay, Grace!  See how many responses you created? Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.  BTW, I agree with you!