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I am on this website to learn english in order to speak fluently, to communicate easily with people around me and everywhere. Learning english today is very important for me because it could permit me to get job and integrate quickly all the systems of my new country.
Besides, my native language is French and i learnt it in my country which located in west Africa.
My favorite hobbies are gym, internet, watching TV...

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am on this website in order to learn English in order and to speak it fluently, to communicate easily with people around me and everywhere else. Learning English today is very important for me because it will help me to get a job and integrate quickly into all the systems aspects of my new country.
    Besides In addition, my native language is French. and I learnt it in my country which is located in west Africa.
    My favorite hobbies are going to the gym, surfing the internet, watching TV...

     

    Welcome Abdoul. Good effort!

    I don't know what you meant by "systems of my new country." What systems are you referring to? I changed it to aspects.

    Good luck learning English.

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