Help me,please...How can I improve on it???

Help me,please...How can I improve on it???

The first step of this research work will be the collection of all the useful and helpful materials that it can be found in Italy, as well as the rest of the world (e.g., there many PhD thesis from many universities that can be considered to increase the preciseness and the accuracy of this research). A great contributor to this collection is the Marcovaldo Foundation, which through its website and its archives, is the collection's most important source. Similarly, I found information about a number of conferences that this foundation organizes, for the discussion of Marcovaldo’s works and about his relationship with other authors.  Some of these discussions also include several topics that could give new stimuli and evidence for my research, enhancing my knowledge about the theme and making me reflect, in a critical way, about my work and the instruments I choose to use.
The second step of this proposal will be the comparison between Marcovaldo’s works and the features of the Italian linguistics. At this point, I’ll start to analyse the lexicon, the syntax and every linguistic structure in the light of several linguistic theories. This comparison will take into account not only Italian grammar, philology and linguistics, but also the general theories of linguistics. For example, during my studies at university, I wrote a thesis about the rule of the creative metaphors in the book of Heinrich Böll, "Group Portray with Lady", using the theory of metaphor by George Lakoff and Mark Johnson, finding interesting results and innovations.
According to Umberto Eco, if a thesis is indeed like a toll road with a start, an end and several entrances, those entrances will surely be the activities in which I’ll take part at the university, and the knowledge I’ll acquire, thanks to the professors and the cooperation with other students.

[Very good English.  I tried to changes based on very formal standards for written English.]