my first formal job
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My First Formal Job
After spring festival, I began to work for a foreign trade corporation. As my first formal job, I felt very nervous because nearly everything is unfamiliar. The most depressing thing is, as a new employee, I need to send the product picture all day until I found a client and begin to build a trade relationship. It's a challenge and boring for me now, but I believe I can fine my place in this line of work.
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Very well done, good luck with the job!
my first formal job
After spring festival, I being began to work for a foreign trade corporation. As my frist formal job, I felt very nervous because nearly all the things are (it would be better to say 'everything' instead of 'all the things' but this is no wrong) unfamiliar. The most depressinged thing is, as a freshman, I need to send the product picture to clients all day until I find ound my client and build the trade relationship. It's a challenge and boring for me now, but I believe I can find my place in with this company line.
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