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I haven't been working for a month. I tired! I want to work and I want to earn money because it's very hard to live without them)
I don't know why but I'm to lazy to study English as intensively as I did it last year. But I need write! Ok, let's try...
8. Tell me about the most fun you ever experienced on the job.
When I worked first time we had a New Year's corporate. There were a lot of competitions between companies. We took part in almost all of them. In the end of that they gave all participants celebrations awards and we had the one 'Company which help everyone'

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    I'm tired of being wthout work (или лучше еще, "I'm tired of not working/being unemployed")

     

    I haven't been working for a month. I'm tired! (Помни, что на английском языке, когда используешь прилагательное или наречие после чем существительного или местоимения, всегда надо использовать глагол между нмим. На русском- Я устала. На английском- я ___ устала- всегда без исключения)

     

    I want to work and I want to earn money because it's very hard to live without them)

    Я изменил этот приложение потому что ты написала слово "them." Это значит, что ты написала о существительных... но TO work and TO EARN- они глаголы. Поэтому, либо можешь сказать "I want TO WORK (глагол) and I want TO EARN (глагол) money because it's very hard to live otherwise" или можешь убрать "to" чтобы эти слово становятся существительны, чтобы можешь написать "them")


    I don't know why but I'm to lazy to study English as intensively as I did it last year. But I need to write! Ok, let's try... Если на русском, глагол заканчивается как "ать/ить/сья/ти то на аглийском, всегда нужно "to" перед


    8. Tell me about the most fun you ever experienced on the job.
    When I worked for the first time, we had a New Year's corporate party(?). There were a lot of competitions between companies. We took part in almost all of them. In At the end of that they gave all participants celebrations awards and we had the one received the 'Company which  who/that helps everyone' Лучше сказать, "They gave awardsto all of the participants, and we received the 'Company who helps everyone' award."


    Неплохо, Лена ) Практикай ) Помни все, что я изменил, и затем ты будешь помнить все твой английски )

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