My Aunt Funny Neighbors
Every time they go to each other's apartments, they argue about which of them is thinner or loose more wight than others and looks younger, imagine six widows fighting about their beauty. Every single time I go to my aunt's neighbor house she asks me about the year that I was born in, cause she has this fight with my aunt that which of us is younger, her daughter's daughter or me!! My aunt enjoys it a lot that I am younger than her!
I might write about them in future, I m not sure.
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My Aunt's Funny Neighbors
My aunt's neighborhood is an apartment complex/building with six units. that my aunt She owns one of them., all of them are six old Everyone living there is a widows. Every time Each time or "Everytime'] I go to visit my aunt, house I will definitely see at least 2 two of them at their windows; while they are either saying hi to me or just staring at me. They [Ambiguous, do you mean these two or all of them] These occupants are really interested in the comings and goings of the place. You can say they are cautious or just nosy [Add something like this to makes your piece more interesting.] knowing which one of them left the apartment and when it happened and when she came back.
Every time Everytime, they go to visit each other's apartments, they would argue about which of them who is thinner, or loose who gained more weight and who became than others and looks younger looking! Imagine six widows fighting about their beauty! [Now you are definitely making your essay more colorful and interesting.] Every single time I go to my aunt's neighbor house visit one of them, she would invariably asks me about the year that I was born. in, cause she has this fight with my aunt that which of us is younger, her daughter's daughter or me!This is because it gives her ammunition to argue with my aunt about whose daughter is younger! My aunt is also a guilty party as she relishes the fact enjoys it a lot that I am the younger one. than her!
I might may write more about them in future, but I m not sure.
Thanks for reading! it :-)
Great stories. You should continue. Some of the stuff you wrote is not wrong but a bit staid and dull. So I just edited them. Hopefully, by learning through examples, you will become a great writer (in English) one day.
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