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My diary 2.24

I had a quarrel with my mother this morning.
Then I went to tax office,because I had to file a tax return.
Then I went to Nagoya station to talk to with my counselor about my study abroad.
When I came back home, I cooked dinner '' Sobameshi''.
It was very delicious and I was stuffed.
I am going to work tomorrow.
I think do my best!

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    My diary 2.24

    I had a quarrel with my mother this morning.
    Then I went to the tax office because I had to file a tax return.
    Then/After that, I went to Nagoya station to talk to with my counselor about my study abroad.
    When I came back home, I cooked dinner, '' Sobameshi''.
    It was very delicious and I was stuffed.
    I am going to work tomorrow.
    I think I will do my best!

    My diary 2.24

    I had a quarrel with my mother this morning.
    Then I went to tax office,because I had to file a tax return.
    Then I went to Nagoya station to talk to with my counselor about my study abroad.
    When I came back home, I cooked dinner '' Sobameshi''.
    It was very delicious and I was stuffed.
    I am going to work tomorrow.
    I think do my best!

    I think I should just try to do my best.

    Great work !! You could also write as below which is more flowing.

    After having a quarrel with my mother in the morning I went to the Tax Office to file my tax return. Later I went to the Nagoya Station to talk with my counselor regarding my study abroad. I returned home and cooked a Sobameshi meal which was delicous and left me stuffed. I will go to work tomorrow and do my best.

     

    This is just an example for you of a different style of writing more than a correction. What is Sabameshi? I must try it when I go to Nagoya in April. :-)

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