Abraham Lincon

Abraham Lincon

This text talks about Abraham Lincoln, a person who started out in a poor family, worked hard, educated himself and, despite all these things, became the most remembered president of United States of America.
When he was a child his father lost all their properties. They lived in a remote region, where the teachers weren't available. Anyway, he kept a wise perspective and read a lot, sometimes the same books over and over again.
Over time he became interested in law, learned about it and after became the sixteenth President of USA. As president he eliminated the slavery in his country and became an important person in the history.

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Abraham Lincon

The text talks about Abraham Lincoln, a person which who started out in a poor family, worked hard, educated by yourself himself, and, despite all these things, became the most remembered president of the United States of America.
When he was a child his father lost all of their properties possessions. They lived in a remote region, where the teachers are didn't weren't available. Anyway Even so, he kept a wise perspective and read a lot, sometimes reading again the same books which he had already read once before.
In the course of time Overtime he was became interested in law, learned about it and after later became the sixteenth president of USA. Such As president, he eliminated the slavery in his country and grew up to be an important person in the history.

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Bom trabalho, vc escreve em ingles muito bem!

Abraham Lincoln

This text talks about Abraham Lincoln, a person who started out in a poor family, worked hard, educated himself, and despite all these things, he became the most remembered memorable president of The United States of America.

When he was a child, his father lost all their properties everything. They lived in a remote region where the teachers wer'nt are didn't available. Anyway He kept a wise perspective and read a lot. Sometimes the same books again. wich he had read.
In the course of time, He was/became interested in law, studied about it, and eventually after became the sixteenth president of the USA. As a president, he eliminated the slavery and became an important person in the history.

Parabens! Pode escrever muito bem! :)