First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because I want to work in Mauritius.  My native language is Chinese; and, I grew up in China. I enjoy in making friends, playing football and badminton, reading, surfing the Internet, etc.  So, I'm here and waiting for you who also want to make friends.

Very Good.  Following are just a few comments:

The second sentence is correct; but, it would be more common to see the sentence written this way: I grew up in China; and, my native language is Chinese.

In the last sentence "for you who also want" is a bit awkward.  You may want to rephrase the sentence.  For example:

So, I'mhere and waiting for any of you who also want to make friends.

So, I'm here waiting for those of you who want to make friends.

So, I'm here waiting for anyone who wants to make friends.