Hiromi
普通翠鸟 Oct 09, 2010 最近,我经常见到一只或者两只年轻的普通翠鸟是在沿着河边飞的。它们大概是兄弟在同一的巢里长大的。它们各个得到自己的地盘的时候,离别生活。 Common Kingfisher Alcedo atthis I can often look one or two young Common Kingfishers flying along the riverbank recently. Probably, they are siblings that have grown up in the same nest. When they get their own territory, they separate to live.
Oct 9, 2010 11:05 AM
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普通翠鸟 Oct 09, 2010

最近,我经常见到一只或者两只年轻的普通翠鸟是在沿着河边飞的。它们大概是兄弟在同一的巢里长大的。它们各个得到自己的地盘的时候,离别生活。

继续瘦身continue make the article more simple,haha:
最近,我经常见到一两只年轻的翠鸟沿着河边飞。它们大概是同一窝孵出的兄弟吧。当它们各自得到自己地盘的时候,就要彼此告别了。

说明:我没有老老实实的按你的文章改,:P。


Common Kingfisher
Alcedo atthis
I can often look one or two young Common Kingfishers flying along the riverbank recently. Probably, they are siblings that have grown up in the same nest. When they get their own territory, they separate to live.
October 11, 2010

普通翠鸟 Oct 09, 2010

最近,我经常见到一只或者两只年轻的普通翠鸟是在沿着河边飞的。它们大概是兄弟在同一的巢里长大的。它们各个得到自己的地盘的时候,离别生活。
最近,我经常看到一两只年轻的普通翠鸟沿着河岸飞行。它们大概是在同一巢里长大的兄弟。当它们拥有自已的领域的时候,它们就得分开生活了。
Common Kingfisher
Alcedo atthis
I can often look one or two young Common Kingfishers flying along the riverbank recently. Probably, they are siblings that have grown up in the same nest. When they get their own territory, they separate to live.
October 9, 2010

普通翠鸟 Oct 09, 2010

最近,我经常见到一只或者两只年轻的普通翠鸟是在沿着河边飞的。它们大概是兄弟在同一的巢里长大的。它们各个得到自己的地盘的时候,离别生活。

翠鸟
最近,

我经常见到

一、两只年轻的翠鸟

沿着河边飞。

它们大概是兄弟

在同一个巢里长大。

它们即将得到自己的地盘,

那时将各自生活。

 

May 3, 2015
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