Keep in touch!!!!!!
At first, we had little conversation. It was fun.
But they don't answer me anymore. I send some email lately(I want to tell I mailed lastly..Is that right?) But nobody answer me!!!!!!
One more, they told me "I want to learn Korean." But most of them don't try to use korean. They just speak their language...
I am tired. But I won't give up :q!!!!!!!!!
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Keep in touch!!!!!!
I sentd mails to people who awere looking for a language exchange partner and some responded. (You can combine these sentences) And I got some mails from them.
At first, we talked a little. had little conversation. It was fun,.Bbut they don't answer me anymore. I sentd some emails lately, bBut nobody answered me!!!!!!
One moreAlso, they told me "I want to learn Korean.," Bbut most of them don't try to use kKorean. They just speak their language...
I am tired,. Bbut I won't give up :q!!!!!!!!!
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Good job! When using conjunctions (and, but, or) to connect two sentences that both have subjects and verbs, make sure that you use a comma and before the conjuction~
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