虚构的对话 - 1
哥哥早!
你今天好像美满的
是啊。今天是我生日
不是明天把?
不是。和你忘了!所以你跟我一起去购物!
不会。不过,我不用有现金
我们顺道去银行取钱
我不记我的信用卡在哪儿
你放心吧!我有它!
[在商场]
这条裙子怎么想?
5公分太短!
这衬衫呢?
太紧身的!
这件呢?
比其他紧身的!算了吧。我们一起下馆子吃饭!
Morning sister
Morning brother
You look happy today
I am - today is my birthday
Isn't it tomorrow?
No - and you forgot! So you're taking me shopping
I can't. Anyway, I have no cash anymore
Let's stop by the bank so you can withdraw money
I forgot where I left my bank card
Don't worry - I have it!
[At the shopping mall]
What do you think of this skirt?
5 cms too short!
And this shirt
Too tight!
How about this?
Even tighter than the other one! Nevermind - I'm taking you to lunch instead!
Corrections
虚构的对话 - 1
早!妹妹!
哥哥早!
你今天好像美满(很高兴)的
是啊。,今天是我生日 。
不是明天把(吧)?
不是。,和(怕)你忘了!所以你跟我一起去购物!
不会(的)。不过,我不用(没有)有现金
(那)我们(就)顺道去银行取钱
我不记我的信用卡在哪儿
你放心吧!我有它!
[在商场]
这条裙子怎么想(样)?
5公分太短!
这衬衫呢?
太紧身的!
这件呢?
比其他紧身的!算了吧。我们一起下馆子吃饭(吧)!
Morning sister
Morning brother
You look happy today
I am - today is my birthday
Isn't it tomorrow?
No - and you forgot! So you're taking me shopping
I can't. Anyway, I have no cash anymore
Let's stop by the bank so you can withdraw money
I forgot where I left my bank card
Don't worry - I have it!
[At the shopping mall]
What do you think of this skirt?
5 cms too short!
And this shirt
Too tight!
How about this?
Even tighter than the other one! Nevermind - I'm taking you to lunch instead!
虚构的对话 - 1
早,妹妹!
哥哥早!
你今天看起来好像(美满的)很开心呀。
是啊。今天是我生日。
不是明天把吗?
不是。和是你忘了(记错了)!所以为此你得跟我一起去购物!
不会。不过不行,我不用现在没带有现金。
我们顺道去银行取钱。
我不记得我的信用卡放在哪儿里了。
你放心吧!它在我这里有它!
[在商场]
这条裙子你觉得怎么想样?
5公分太短了!
这衬衫呢?
太紧身的了!
那这件呢?
比其他的更紧身的!算了吧。,我们一起下馆子吃饭去!
Morning sister
Morning brother
You look happy today
I am - today is my birthday
Isn't it tomorrow?
No - and you forgot! So you're taking me shopping
I can't. Anyway, I have no cash anymore
Let's stop by the bank so you can withdraw money
I forgot where I left my bank card
Don't worry - I have it!
[At the shopping mall]
What do you think of this skirt?
5 cms too short!
And this shirt
Too tight!
How about this?
Even tighter than the other one! Nevermind - I'm taking you to lunch instead!
虚构的对话 - 1
早,妹妹!
哥哥,早!
你今天好像美满的 看起来真美丽
是啊!今天是我生日
不是明天把?吗
不是,原来你忘了!所以你跟我一起去购物!
不会忘记你的生日。不过,我没有现金
我们顺道去银行取钱
我不记我的信用卡在哪儿
你放心吧!它在我手上!
[在商场]
这条裙子你怎么看?
5公分,太短!
这衬衫呢?
太紧身了!
这件呢?
比其他更紧身!算了吧。我们一起下馆子吃饭!
Morning sister
Morning brother
You look happy today
I am - today is my birthday
Isn't it tomorrow?
No - and you forgot! So you're taking me shopping
I can't. Anyway, I have no cash anymore
Let's stop by the bank so you can withdraw money
I forgot where I left my bank card
Don't worry - I have it!
[At the shopping mall]
What do you think of this skirt?
5 cms too short!
And this shirt
Too tight!
How about this?
Even tighter than the other one! Nevermind - I'm taking you to lunch instead!
虚构的对话 - 1
妹妹早上好!
哥哥早上好!
你今天好像很开心
是啊。因为今天是我生日
不是明天吗?
不是。你忘记我的生日了,所以你要带我去购物!
可以啊。不过,我没有现金了
我们顺道去银行取钱
我不记得我的银行卡放在哪里了
你放心吧!我有!
[在商场]
这条裙子怎么样?
5公分太短了!
这衬衫呢?
太紧身了!
这件呢?
比其他的更紧身!算了吧,我们一起去吃饭!
Morning sister
Morning brother
You look happy today
I am - today is my birthday
Isn't it tomorrow?
No - and you forgot! So you're taking me shopping
I can't. Anyway, I have no cash anymore
Let's stop by the bank so you can withdraw money
I forgot where I left my bank card
Don't worry - I have it!
[At the shopping mall]
What do you think of this skirt?
5 cms too short!
And this shirt
Too tight!
How about this?
Even tighter than the other one! Nevermind - I'm taking you to lunch instead!
虚构的对话 - 1
早妹妹!
哥哥早!
你今天好像美满的 很开心
是啊。今天是我生日
不是明天把吗?
不是。和你竟然忘了!所以你要跟我一起去购物!
不会现在不行。不过,我不用有现金 因为我现在没现金了
那我们先顺道去银行取钱(this sentence is good!)
我不记我的信用卡在哪儿 我忘了我把信用卡放哪儿了
你放心吧!我有它! 它在我这儿
[在商场]
你觉着这条裙子怎么样想? (The sentence you written means what does the skirt think of ?haha~)
5公分太短!
这件衬衫呢?
太紧身了!
这件呢?
比其他紧身的这件比那件更紧身!算了吧没事。我们一起下馆子吃饭! 我还是带你去下馆子吧~
Morning sister
Morning brother
You look happy today
I am - today is my birthday
Isn't it tomorrow?
No - and you forgot! So you're taking me shopping
I can't. Anyway, I have no cash anymore
Let's stop by the bank so you can withdraw money
I forgot where I left my bank card
Don't worry - I have it!
[At the shopping mall]
What do you think of this skirt?
5 cms too short!
And this shirt
Too tight!
How about this?
Even tighter than the other one! Nevermind - I'm taking you to lunch instead!
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