Don't be rude please

Don't be rude please

I don’t like it when people are rude, arrogant, unpleasant or angry with each other. I don’t feel well It upsets me when I have to be around such people and listen to their cursing.

In my opinion, I’m a polite person – I don’t use either swear and vulgar words or vulgar expressions. I never insult other people and I’d feel embarrassed to comment highlight my unsuccessful attempt or failure by cursing. I think that we can use a lot of other words which have the same or similar meaning and don’t sound so bad.

Last week on the way to work I saw a young man arguing with a ticket inspector. The young man was extremely rude even though he didn’t have a ticket. I couldn’t work on such a position because I don’t know how to deal with such people.

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I realize how lucky I am because my friends and colleagues are nice and polite.

Don't be rude please

I don’t like when people are rude, arrogant, unpleasant or angry with each other. I don’t feel well when I have to be around such people and listen to their cursing.

Not feeling well means you feel ill, I think the word good would work better.
 
In my opinion, I’m a polite person – I don’t use swear or vulgar words. I never insult other people and I’d feel embarrassed to comment on my unsuccessful attempt or failure by cursing. I think that we can use a lot of other words which have the same or similar meaning and don’t sound so bad.

Last week on the way to work I saw a young man arguing with a ticket inspector. The young man was extremely rude even though he didn’t have a ticket. I couldn’t work in such a position because I don’t know how to deal with such people.

I realize how lucky I am because my friends and colleagues are nice and polite.

I think maybe, it is not luck. But that you attract the same type of person as yourself.

Great entry.

:-)