學廣東話
我宜家學咁緊 (1) 寫字，不過我覺得好難學，雖然我之前喺大學學咗兩年普通話，但是喺 (2) 同(3) 廣東話有好多大(4)分別。
我想係italki寫多d (5) 同買 搵(6) 多d朋友幫下我，你地有冇意見可以介紹卑返(7)我聽(8)？我想學得(9)快d同買搵多d機會寫(下 (10))字，多謝大家！
1) The pronunciation of the word "緊" is better than that of "甘"
2) 喺 is what we say, 是 is what we write
3) 同 is needed as a function of comparison, it is the same as 「A跟B是不一樣的」 in Putonghua, meaning 'A and B is not the same', with comparison meaning in the word 'and'
4) It has a lot of differences. 有好多分別. But usually I will say 'There is a big difference' 有好大分別 in Cantonese
5) The object is missing here. If you mean to write more "stuffs" than you can say 寫多d野. Or simply say that 寫多D日記, 寫多D文作, or 作多D文
6) 埋, better pronunciation
7) Give me some feedback? "介紹" means "to introduce", it is not needed here
8) Just need to use "聽" after "意見可以介紹卑返我", "give me feedback" that kind of stuff, is a phrase.
9) No meaning, but speak more smoothly
10) Smoothly? It depends
學廣東話
我宜家學咁 紧 （=ing）寫字，不過 我覺得好難學，雖然我之前喺大學學咗兩年普通話，但是廣東話有好多 大分別。
我想係italki寫多d野 （=thing）同買 埋搵多d朋友幫下我，你地有冇咩 (=什么)意見 建议 （意见通常用在）可以介紹 讲卑我听？我想學快d同買 埋搵多d機會寫字，多謝大家！
