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Writing: report. Use of mobile phones

Introduction
This report explains why mobile phones are important for students, and makes recommendations about their use in the school. The information comes from students and some of their parents.

Problems
- Teachers are right saying that playing games or listening music to the headphones during the class is wrong, but these are not the only uses of mobile phone. There are situations when parents need to talk with their sons or daughters about important things or emergencies.
- If pupils want to get home earlier because they feel ill, they must use their phones to call someone to take them home.
- We can also use the phone to call to the ambulance or police, or even to take a look at the clock.

Recommendations
Mobile phones are indispensable for us, wherever we'd be. I think that students should bring their mobile phones at school, but they also must respect a few prohibitions. The best way to maintain order is that every mobile phone must be hold on the desk, on silent, so that no one can use it for entertainment when the teachers explains something , except in the breaks. Then everyone is allowed to enjoy good music.

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    Writing: report. Use of mobile phones

    Introduction
    This report explains why mobile phones are important for students, and makes some recommendations about their use in the school. The information comes from students and some of their parents.

    Problems
    - Teachers are right in saying that playing games or listening to music to the on/with headphones during the class is wrong, but these are not the only uses of mobile phones. There are situations when parents might need to talk with their sons or daughters about important things or emergencies.
    - If pupils want to get go home earlier early because they feel ill, they must use their phones to call someone to take them home.
    - We can also use the mobile phones to call to the ambulance or police, or even to take a look at the clock.

    Recommendations
    Mobile phones are indispensable for us, wherever we'd be we are. I think that students should bring their mobile phones at to school, but they also must also respect a few prohibitions rules/guidelines. The best way to maintain order is thatwould be for every mobile phone must to be hold kept on the desk, on silent, so that no one can could use it for entertainment when the teachers is explaining explains something , except in the during breaks. Then everyone is would be allowed to enjoy good music.

    Writing: report. Use of mobile phones

    Introduction
    This report explains why mobile phones are important for students, and makes recommendations about their use in the school. The information comes from students and some of their parents.

    Problems
    - Teachers are right saying that playing games or listening to music to the trough headphones during the class is wrong, but these are not the only uses of mobile phones. There are situations when parents need to talk with their sons or daughters about important things or emergencies.
    - If pupils want to get home earlier because they feel ill  don't feel well , they must need to  use their phones to call someone to take them home.
    - We can also use the phone to call to the ambulance or police, or even to take a look at the clock.

    Recommendations
    Mobile phones are indispensable for us, wherever we'd be. I think that students should bring their mobile phones at school, but they also must respect a few prohibitions rules. The best way to maintain order is that every mobile phone must be hold on the desk, on silent, so that no one can use it for entertainment when the teachers explains something , except in the breaks. Then everyone is allowed to enjoy good music.( Or Alexei Yagudin skating  :)) )

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