Can someone correct this old notebooks, pls?

Can someone correct this these old notebook entries, please pls? [It is more polite if you spell out the entire word if you need help.  It shows that you are being lazy to three more letters out...  Then why should others care?]  I shall take a look at them.

http://www.italki.com/entry/320255

http://www.italki.com/entry/313332

http://www.italki.com/entry/310860

http://www.italki.com/entry/313466

http://www.italki.com/entry/310174