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I bought an artificial balsam fir that I could use several years to keep away from having to cut a Christmas tree each year and help care our planet, but my effort was unsuccessful, to keep throwing the fir-scented air freshener every fifteen minutes because I needed the Christmas atmosphere.

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    Is this correct? It is a mini saga, only 50 words..

    I bought an artificial balsam fir that I could use for several years to avoid having to cut down a Christmas tree each year, and to help care for our planet.  But my efforts were unsuccessful, because I had to keep spraying fir-scented air freshener every fifteen minutes because I needed a Christmas atmosphere.

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