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The magic of makeup

The magic of makeup make me more beautiful. I think it's necessary to learn it.

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    The magic of makeup

    The magic of makeup make me more beautiful. I think it's necessary to learn it.

     

     

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    The magic of makeup

    The magic of makeup makes me more beautiful. I think it's necessary to learn it.

     

    That is the minimal change needed to make it a correct English sentence. On the whole, you have written very well. A single missing S is not an issue.

     

    Since you are a student, I will add to your sentence.

    You could write.

    The magic of makeup makes me feel more beautiful. I feel that it's necessary to learn it.

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    Makeup makes me feel more beautiful, it's magic ! I feel a need to learn it.


    Since these sentences could be read aloud, the last part "it's magic" would be said in a rising tone to indicate excitement and joy.


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