The magic of makeup
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Original
The magic of makeup
The magic of makeup make me more beautiful. I think it's necessary to learn it.
Correction
The magic of makeup
The magic of makeup makes me more beautiful. I think it's necessary to learn it.
That is the minimal change needed to make it a correct English sentence. On the whole, you have written very well. A single missing S is not an issue.
Since you are a student, I will add to your sentence.
You could write.
The magic of makeup makes me feel more beautiful. I feel that it's necessary to learn it.
or
Makeup makes me feel more beautiful, it's magic ! I feel a need to learn it.
Since these sentences could be read aloud, the last part "it's magic" would be said in a rising tone to indicate excitement and joy.
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