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today i receive a birthday present from sis.She send me a postcard ,chocolate,eye carem and dress.That's so surprise!
See my shoes~it is my favourite present,it's exquisite.
my English is bad,i need to study hard ,i hope make friends in italki,have people can teach me English,thx~~~

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    today i Today I receive received a birthday present from sis (we usually say 'sister' but 'sis' works too, though it is informal). She send sent me a postcard ,chocolate,eye carem ice cream and dress.That's so surprise!
    See Look at my shoes~it is my favourite present,it's exquisite.
    my My English is bad,i need to study hard ,i hope to make friends in with italki,have people can teach me English,thx~~~

     

    'I hope to make friends with italki' - we would usually say: 'I hope italki can help me make friends'

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    today i received a birthday present from my sister. She send me a postcard ,chocolate,eye Icecaream and dress.That's so It was a surprise!
    See my shoes~it is my favourite present,it's  an exquisite.
    My English is bad,I need to study hard ,I hope, I will make friends in through italki, have and could meet with people,those could  teach me English,thx~~~

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