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i am learning the composition. In the traffic court of a large mid-western city, a young lady in a blouse was brought before the judge in charge to answer a ticket given to her for driving through a red light. 在中西部一个大城市的交通法庭里，一位身穿衬衫的年轻女士被带到主法官面前，她由于开车闯红灯被开了罚单。 She explained to his honor that she was a school teacher, and requested an immediate disposal of her case in order that she might hasten on to her classes. 女士向法官解释说，她是一名学校老师，请求法官马上处理她的案子，以便可以快点回去上课。 A wild gleam flashed in the judge's eye, “You're a school teacher, eh?” he said, “Madam, I shall achieve my lifelong ambition. Sit down at that conference table and write ‘I went through a red light' five hundred times.”

Mar 13, 2013 2:06 AM

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A：不用子

A：语法没错，但不必要

A：利用还是包括字

I am learning thecomposition.

In the traffic court of a large mid-western city, a young lady in a blouse was brought before the judge in charge to answer for a ticket given to her for driving through a red light.
在中西部一个大城市的交通法庭里，一位身穿衬衫的年轻女士被带到主法官面前，她由于开车闯红灯被开了罚单。

She explained to his honor that she was a school teacher, and requested an immediate disposal of her case in order so that she might hasten on to her classes.

女士向法官解释说，她是一名学校老师，请求法官马上处理她的案子，以便可以快点回去上课。

A wild gleam flashed in the judge's eye, “You're a school teacher, eh?” he said, “Madam, I shall achieve my lifelong ambition. Sit down at that conference table and write ‘I went through a red light' five hundred times.”