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The first impression.

Hello!
What do you think?
What can you tell about yourself in the first English lesson ?
How do you describe yourself?
What's better to use?
What's sentences?
For example:"My name is Dasha. I work at a trading company.
I like to communicate with friends, going to the cinema, to the cafe and other intresting places. I consider myself a sociable person."
What's anything you to use for introduce yourself?
What can you recommend?
If it's not difficult, you will write your advices in comments. Thank you.

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    The first impression.

    Hello!
    What do you think?
    What can you tell about yourself in the first English lesson ?
    How do you describe yourself?
    What's better to use?
    What sentences?
    For example:"My name is Dasha. I work at a trading company.
    I like to socialize with friends, going to the cinema, to the cafe and other intresting places. I consider myself a sociable person."
    What's anything you to use for introduce yourself?
    What can you recommend?
    If it's not difficult, you will write your advices in comments. Thank you.

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    The first impression.

    Hello!
    What do you think?
    What can you tell about yourself in the first English lesson ?
    How do you describe yourself?
    What's best to use?
    What sentences?
    For example:"My name is Dasha. I work for a trading company.
    I like to socialize with friends, going to the cinema, to the cafe, and other interesting places. I consider myself a sociable person."
    What's anything you to use to introduce yourself?
    What can you recommend?
    If it's not difficult, you will write your advices in comments. Thank you.

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