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In pictures you are always laughing,making my heart safe But you ask me nothing I can't talk to you You are just looking at me with a smile Since you were gone,I can't have forgotten you You would said 'I follow you,so never leave me alone never ever` Why did you break a promise by yourself? I can't trust you The first time I met you I thought you are the one for me It is still now But you were gone The one was gone I'm alone The first time I met you I thought you are the one for me It is still now But you were gone The one was gone I'm alone I'm alone ::a poem

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    Alone

    In pictures you are always laughing, making my heart safe
    But you ask me nothing
    I can't talk to you
    You are just looking at me with a smile
    Since you have gone, I can't forget you
    You would say 'I follow you,so never leave me alone never ever`
    Why did you break a promise you made?
    I can't trust you
    The first time I met you
    I thought you are the one for me
    It is still now that you are gone.
    The one has gone
    I'm alone
    The first time I met you
    I thought you are the one for me
    It is still now that you are gone
    The one was gone
    I'm alone
    I'm alone

    ::a poem

     

    [Good work.  Poems are always difficult.  I hope I didn't misinterpret you too badly.]

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