alone
In pictures you are always laughing,making my heart safe But you ask me nothing I can't talk to you You are just looking at me with a smile Since you were gone,I can't have forgotten you You would said 'I follow you,so never leave me alone never ever` Why did you break a promise by yourself? I can't trust you The first time I met you I thought you are the one for me It is still now But you were gone The one was gone I'm alone The first time I met you I thought you are the one for me It is still now But you were gone The one was gone I'm alone I'm alone ::a poem
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Alone
In pictures, you are always laughing, making my heart safe
But you ask me nothing
I can't talk to you
You are just looking at me with a smile
Since you have gone, I can't forget you
You would say 'I follow you,so never leave me alone never ever`
Why did you break a promise you made?
I can't trust you
The first time I met you
I thought you are the one for me
It is still now that you are gone.
The one has gone
I'm alone
The first time I met you
I thought you are the one for me
It is still now that you are gone
The one was gone
I'm alone
I'm alone
::a poem
[Good work. Poems are always difficult. I hope I didn't misinterpret you too badly.]
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