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大家好! 在蒙特利尔市三月三十一日,两点到四点有新的法语角要开始。 它的第一个活动是"复活节和巧克力"。 这是为什么它在做巧克力的餐馆要发生:Juliette & Chocolat (1615 Rue Saint-Denis, Montréal, QC, H2X 3K3, http://www.julietteetchocolat.com)。 我要给你们,开始,中,和高水平使用句字的一张页。两天以前,请确认您的光临。 欢迎大家!

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    hello,i think a native chinese can`t understand what`s the point you are showing if translate follow those oiginal words ,so i wanna change some places and make it as a chinese way announcement.

    大家好!

         在蒙特利尔市的巧克力餐馆即将举行法语角,第一轮活动是"复活节和巧克力",凡参与活动的朋友将会领到一张评分卡,我将对结果进行计分。请提前两天预约,届时恭候大家光临。  

          详情请咨询Juliette & Chocolat (1615 Rue Saint-Denis, Montréal, QC, H2X 3K3, http://www.julietteetchocolat.com

     

    and do you have gifts for those friends got high score? if you prepared you can say 优胜者将获得一份精美礼品 which means  those whom got high scores can get one small lovely gifts.

    请在两天以前确认您的光临。

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