Can anyone help me correct this announcement ?
hello,i think a native chinese can`t understand what`s the point you are showing if translate follow those oiginal words ,so i wanna change some places and make it as a chinese way announcement.
详情请咨询Juliette & Chocolat (1615 Rue Saint-Denis, Montréal, QC, H2X 3K3, http://www.julietteetchocolat.com
and do you have gifts for those friends got high score? if you prepared you can say 优胜者将获得一份精美礼品 which means those whom got high scores can get one small lovely gifts.
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