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A group of sheep

Recently, I watched a series video on youtube.
I saw a car rush into a group of sheep.
Sheeps are scared. They run one fellow one
But becoming a cycle.
How could them run successfully by one fellow one?

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    A group flock of sheep

    Recently, I watched a video (1) series video on youtube.
    I saw a car rush driving into a group flock of sheep.
    The Sheeps sheep(3) are were(2) scared. They run ran one fellow one  after another
    But they began to run around in circles becoming a cycle.
    How could them they run away successfully following one after another? by one fellow one?

     

    (1) word order

    (2) past tense - I saw, Sheep were, they ran, but became...

    (3) sheep is plural already

     

     

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