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Today is March 27,I am learning English for two hours.I think study English is very difficult.I don't konw how to study English.Just then,I meet a new friend Miss Lizzie Chu,I'm glad to see her!

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    Study English

    Today is March 27,I am learning English for two hours.I think study English is very difficult.I don't konw how to study English.Just then,I meet a new friend Miss Lizzie Chu,I'm glad to see her!

     

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    Today is March 27th, I've been studying English for two hours. I think that studying English is very difficult. I don't know which is the best way to study it but, right while I was reflecting upon this, I met a new friend, Miss Lizzie Chu. I'm so glad to see her.

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    Today is March 27. I am studying English for two hours and it is very difficult. I don't know how am I going to study it but then, I'm so glad to meet a new friend and her name is Miss Lizzie Chu.

    ~ Avoid redundacy. If you can put all the details in on sentence, just do it :) It's much better. ^^

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