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Can you correct me pleaese?
Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. • automobiles • bicycles • airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Transportation vehicles have totally changed human beings' lives. Every kind of vehicles has its impact on lives and makes them easier and more comfortable. Everyone has his/her view. In my opinion, the bicycle has brought/made the most changes in our lives, for many reasons. but I provide three in this essay. Firstly, imagine your lives with a bicycle. You ride it every day, and regularly. This way you do your works and exercise simultaneously. Riding a bicycle can help you to be healthy. When you are aging, your body will need less chemical medicine. Secondly, the environment climate is tending toward warming with a spiking trend. If people use their bicycle for daily affairs, pollution would be reduced. So, we will have tidy cleaner air and prevent global warming. This phenomenon has many bad effects on human beings and their surroundings, which can cause critical problems in the future. Last but not least, your body and mind work when you drive ride a bike. You can improve your concentration ability by doing this. In conclusion, bikes are associated with healthier conditions for air and living beings. Personally, I think for these features it undoubtedly has the most important role in our everyday life.
-'Tidy' is synonymous with 'clean', but we use it for things like buildings or cars, not for the air.
-We use 'drive' for mechanical vehicles. You 'ride' a bike.
-Pay close attention to articles (a, the). Every Farsi speaker has difficulty with these.
Very interesting and well-written. I try to ride every day myself.
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