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我不喜欢italki的新布局,因为我不能容易的看我的朋友们的新随笔。

I do not like italki's new layout because I can't easily see my friends' new essays.

我悲伤,因为我女朋友不肥。

I am grieving because my girlfriend is not fat.

昨晚,我睡得不好。我熬了一整夜,我想到吃她的软肉。

Last night I didn't sleep well. I stayed up all night and thought about eating her soft flesh.

我有尖的牙,像所有鲨鱼。

I have sharp teeth, like all sharks do.

我希望你能原谅我。

I hope you can forgive me.

互联网很有用。

The internet is very useful.

Italki 变得不那么有用了。

Italki has become less useful.

我女朋友仍然不肥。

My girlfriend is still not fat.

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    全球疯狂!

    我不喜欢italki的新布局,因为我不能容易的看我的朋友们的新随笔。 (随笔is right)

    I do not like italki's new layout because I can't easily see my friends' new essays.

    我悲伤,因为我女朋友不肥。

    I am grieving because my girlfriend is not fat.

    昨晚,我睡得不好。我熬了一整夜,我想吃她的软肉。

    Last night I didn't sleep well. I stayed up all night and thought about eating her soft flesh.

    我有尖的牙(You also can use 尖利 as well),像所有鲨鱼一样

    I have sharp teeth, like all sharks do.

    我希望你能原谅我。

    I hope you can forgive me.

    互联网很有用。

    The internet is very useful.

    Italki 变得不那么有用了。 (Well done for this sentence!)

    Italki has become less useful.

    我女朋友仍然不肥。 (Or 我女朋友仍然很瘦)
    My girlfriend is still not fat.

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    You‘ve done a good job on this essay. And I do agree with you that italki is making a stupy improvement. I found this essay by entering Harry's homepage instead of finding some my friends' updates on my homepage.

     

    By the way, why is the title "全球疯狂“?

     

    全球疯狂!

    我不喜欢italki的新布局页面设计,因为我不容易我的朋友们的新随笔作文布局:is more likely to be used in something bigger like "the layout of your house".  随笔:this is a type of informal essay in China, guess you got this from a translator:) And, I agree with you, up till now, I didnt find anything really improved in this least user friendly layout..

    I do not like italki's new layout because I can't easily see my friends' new essays.

    我悲伤,因为我女朋友不胖,我感觉有点悲伤 we put the reason ahead of the consequence in the sentence mostly.

    I am grieving because my girlfriend is not fat.

    昨晚,我睡得不好。熬了一整夜,我想吃她的软肉(嫩肉) unsuitable to be read by children, lol

    Last night I didn't sleep well. I stayed up all night and thought about eating her soft flesh.

    我有尖尖牙,像所有鲨鱼。

    I have sharp teeth, like all sharks do.

    我希望你能原谅我。

    I hope you can forgive me.

    互联网很有用。

    The internet is very useful.

    Italki 变得不那么有用了。

    Italki has become less useful.

    我女朋友仍然不肥。

    My girlfriend is still not fat.

     

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