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Sometimes,I look like a children,so I must change now,I want to more mature.I don't want to let you down.I will go and find you.We always go on. Believe me!!!!


有时候,我会像个小孩子一样,但是现在我必须得改变,我要成熟点。我不想让你失望,我回去找你的,我们会一直走下去的,相信我

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    thinking(感想)

    Sometimes I look like a children child ('children' is plural so there shouldn't be an 'a'), so I must change now, I want to be more mature. I don't want to let you down. I will go come and find you. We will/shall (会)always go on. Believe me!!!!


    有时候,我会像个小孩子一样,但是现在我必须得改变,我要成熟点。我不想让你失望,我回去找你的,我们会一直走下去的,相信我

     

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