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I want to meet nice people.

Hello

I would like to strengthen my English skills, because it's difficult for me to take English Class, because I don't have time.
I'm a kind person, and I like to have many friends.

I'm planning to live in Canada, and I think It's important to speak fluently.

Please Help me! :)

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    I want to meet nice people.

    Hello

    I would like to strengthen my English skills, and I'm here because I don't have time to take English classes. I'm a kind person, and I like to have many friends.

    I'm planning to live in Canada, and I think It's important to speak fluently.

    Please Help me! :)

     

    My humble corrections. Very good. Few mistakes. Most of the changes I made were just how I'd say it, and not because your way was necessarily wrong. Have a good day! ~Jonathan

    I want to meet nice people.

    Hello

    I would like to improve my English skills, because it's difficult for me to take an English Class, because I don't have time.
    I'm a kind person, and I like to have many friends.

    I'm planning to live in Canada, and I think It's important to speak fluently.

    Please Help me! :)

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