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I woke up past 5:00 pm. I found it had alreadly become slightly blight outdside.
Today it is likely to become fine. It was cloudy and a little cold all the day yesterday. It reduced the beauty of Sakura blossom in half.

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    Does this entry make sense?

    I woke up past just after 5:00 pm am (you probably mean morning, right?). I found saw thatit had alreadly become slightly blight light outdside.
    Today it is likely going to become be fine a nice day. It was cloudy and a little cold all the day yesterday. It The cold reduced the number of beauty of beautiful Sakura blossoms in by half. (Do you mean that the cold reduced the beauty of the blossoms, or that it caused half of the blossoms to fall, reducing the number of flowers in bloom? I ask because it is harder to "quantify" a beauty score. It's like saying yesterday, on a scale of 1 to 100, the sakura was only a 50 because of the cold).

     

    I love sakura blossoms too! They look like snow from a distance.

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