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My Spring Break

For Chinese Class in school, my teacher wants us to write about our Spring Break. This is what I wrote:

春假期间,我有很多乐趣,但也研究了很多。我的兄弟春假回家的时候,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸和玩视频游戏经营场所,称为第1轮。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。对于剩下的春假期间,我做我的功课,叫 Round 1。我研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假是今年的一样。明年,我还打算做同样的有一点点的乐趣,也为学校学习。我不期待像我一样做的暑假,春假期间。

What I wanted to say:
During Spring Break, I had a lot of fun but also studied a lot. My brother came back home for Spring Break and he took me to many fun places. He drove me to buy boba and to play at a video game arcade called Round 1. On Easter Day, my dad taught me how to drive. For the rest of Spring Break, I did my homework and studied for my AP exams. I studied United States history, biology, English, and Calculus AB. Last year's Spring Break is the same as this year's. Next year, I also plan on doing the same by having a little bit of fun and also studying for school. I don't look forward to Spring Break as much as I do for Summer Break.

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    My Spring Break

    For Chinese Class in school, my teacher wants us to write about our Spring Break. This is what I wrote:

    这个春假期间,我过得非常有趣,也学到了很多东西。有很多乐趣,但也研究了很多。我的兄弟春假回家的时候,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸,我们还在一个叫做“第1轮“的视频游戏经营场所里玩。称为第1轮。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。在春假其余的时间里,对于剩下的春假期间,我做我的功课和准备我的AP课程考试。叫 Round 1。我学习研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假和今年的春假我几乎过得一样。明年,我还是同样打算注意做点有趣的事情做同样的有一点点的乐趣当然会学习学校的功课为学校学习我并不期望我春假做的事情能跟我暑假做的事情一样我不期待像我一样做的暑假,春假期间。

    What I wanted to say:
    During Spring Break, I had a lot of fun but also studied a lot. My brother came back home for Spring Break and he took me to many fun places. He drove me to buy boba and to play at a video game arcade called Round 1. On Easter Day, my dad taught me how to drive. For the rest of Spring Break, I did my homework and studied for my AP exams. I studied United States history, biology, English, and Calculus AB. Last year's Spring Break is the same as this year's. Next year, I also plan on doing the same by having a little bit of fun and also studying for school. I don't look forward to Spring Break as much as I do for Summer Break.

     

    春假期间,我有很多乐趣我玩的很开心,但也研究了很多有很认真的学习。我的兄弟哥哥春假回家的时候,带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸和玩视频游戏经营场所,称为第1轮。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。对于剩下的春假期间,我做我的功课,叫 Round 1。我研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假是今年的一样。明年,我还打算做同样的有一点点的乐趣的事,也为学校学习做铺垫我不期待像我一样做的暑假像春假期间一样)?

     

    有些地方语序不对,我没怎么看懂你想表达的意思。


    My Spring Break

    For Chinese Class in school, my teacher wants us to write about our Spring Break. This is what I wrote:

    春假期间,我有很多乐趣,但也研究了很多我玩的很好,同时也学习了很多东西我的兄弟春假回家的时候,放春假时我兄弟也回家了,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸和玩视频游戏经营场所,称为第1轮他开车带我去买boba,还去叫Round1的娱乐中心玩视频游戏。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。对于剩下的春假期间利用剩余的时间我做我的功课我完成了家庭作业并为AP考试进行了复习叫 Round 1。我研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假今年的一样。明年,我还打算做同样的有一点点的乐我同样打算做一点有乐趣的活动也为学校学习也学习一些学校的课程我不期待像我一样做的暑假,春假期间我不希望在春假和暑假做同样的事情

     

    What I wanted to say:
    During Spring Break, I had a lot of fun but also studied a lot. My brother came back home for Spring Break and he took me to many fun places. He drove me to buy boba and to play at a video game arcade called Round 1. On Easter Day, my dad taught me how to drive. For the rest of Spring Break, I did my homework and studied for my AP exams. I studied United States history, biology, English, and Calculus AB. Last year's Spring Break is the same as this year's. Next year, I also plan on doing the same by having a little bit of fun and also studying for school. I don't look forward to Spring Break as much as I do for Summer Break.

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