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could you give me the right version of these english sentences?

Before bedtime read we a story.
Hear you that sound?
Pick one!
Came Helen for a visit
Whom met she in Seattle?
Animals, loves much my mother
They want that their favorite time the league wins.
The sailor it fished.
Once the shopping center inaugurated is, we can go and see it.
The notebook that a lower price has.


In the living room, is placed the sofa
Defends the area not to be invaded
Keep it raining?
Today, have raised taxes
Dishes them is washing the dishwasher
To the restaurant goes she once a month
I will try that you the damages not notice.
Until she her glasses found, could not see anything.
While they in the shower are, dries she her hair.
They were at the beach relaxing
She to the frontier has to travel
If would be any problem, a technician would help you.

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    could you give me the right version of these english sentences?

    Before bedtime read we a story.
    Hear you that sound?
    Pick one!
    Came Helen for a visit
    Whom met she in Seattle?
    Animals, loves much my mother
    They want that their favorite time the league wins.
    The sailor it fished.
    Once the shopping center inaugurated is, we can go and see it.
    The notebook that a lower price has.


    In the living room, is placed the sofa
    Defends the area not to be invaded
    Keep it raining?
    Today, have raised taxes
    Dishes them is washing the dishwasher
    To the restaurant goes she once a month
    I will try that you the damages not notice.
    Until she her glasses found, could not see anything.
    While they in the shower are, dries she her hair.
    They were at the beach relaxing
    She to the frontier has to travel
    If would be any problem, a technician would help you.

     

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    Before bedtime we read a story.
    Do you hear  that sound?
    Pick one!
    Helen came for a visit.
    Who did  she met in Seattle?
    my mother loves animals very much.
    They want their favourite team in  the league to win.
    The sailor fished.
    Once the shopping center is inaugurated, we can go and see it.
    The notebook that has a lower price.

    In the living room, there is  a sofa
    *Defends the area not to be invaded -- somewhat complex to correct as I do not know if you are taking about a group, a person or a thing.  - They defend the area so it is not invaded -
    *Keep it raining? - Wil it keep raining ?
    Today, they have raised taxes
    The Dishes are  washing the dishwasher

    She goes to the restaurant  once a month
    *I will try that you the damages not notice. -  again complex, is the item damaged, are you hiding it ? - I will try to hide the damage so you do not notice.
    Until she  found her glasses, she could not see anything.
    While they are in the shower, she dires her hair.
    They were at the beach relaxing
    Sher has to travel to the frontie
    If there  any problem, a technician will help you.

     

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