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北加,才一场情感

 

几百万微小魂灵,通简单夏天可触知。
还没一名能见白天,却仍妳中都活去。
创造,为此才练演,假然而好对。
这练习爱,好天意的,麦田中穿迂着。

山景波浪,林影, 日光。我赢的自然都收获。
地图扩展,躺着等待。天真而偏然期待。
为不动的山与真实,即兴的剧与经都采纳。
人绘制进程:A到B,但路上金未知,生也。

墨与图,我背上晒,经线数条沿妳穿妳。
咱那天整世界环行到,场最终与永长情会。

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    norcal, Just a Feeling

     

    Million something little souls, through simple summer manifest. And none could live to see the day, but still they live inside you. Creation, just the sake, recital; fake and yet so right. This practice love so god-intended, weaved through fields of rye. The waving hills, wood shade, and sun; took all the nature I had won. Sprawled out map, spread map in wait, naive yet still and waiting. For unmoving truth and mountains, took the script and scripture improvised. One plots a course, just A to B, but life is unknown gold between. Ink and map, sun on my back, meridians trace, pass through you. We traveled round the world that day, one last and everlong tryst.

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