오늘 내 머리를 혼자 깎았어요.
내 머리카락은 괜찮(았)는데, 우리 어머니가 너무 싫어 하셨어요.
// i dont understand that you hate your mother or mother hate your hair cut. so from context, i think that your mother hate your hair cut, if then 너무 싫어 하셨어요. would be good.
그래서, 내가 너무 슬퍼요. =(
// miss use pasten tence. i guess that your emotion about hair is present, 슬펐었어요 is not a proper.
오늘은 좋은 날이 아니네요.
// miss use pasten tence.
내일은 더 좋은 날이 되면, 내가 더 행복할 것 같아요. (or 행복할 거예요.)
// quite hard to say about detail, but let me try
// 내가 행복할께요. -> 내가 행복할게요. // just spell check
// Happy will come your future, but 내가 행복할께요. is sims to be proper at present, and 할게요 is relate about acting, but will happy is not a actiong, rather then state about your mind.
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