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Is there any awkwardness in these sentences? [It is more natural to write as, "Are these sentences awkward?"]
I sometimes can still feel her warmth and love. Whenever I think about of her, I am relaxed and my heart is filled with relaxedness and calm. I believe that she is watching me and taking care of me. I hope that she would knows my love and respect toward for her; my grandmother, up there in the Heaven. I'll reminisce about her my grandmother whenever I look at the a twinkling star twinkling up in the sky. which might It may be my grandmother. Good imagery!
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