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please correct my essay !! theme of my writings (it is not the mountain we conquer but ourselves)

This saying belongs to the explorer Edmund Hillary . Edmund Hillary was a New Zealand mountaineer and explorer.
His words make us think. Obviously the mountain represents a challenge in life.
I think that meaning of these words is that everyone in life has a problem that he has to decide . Everyone is afraid of something or he just did not confident in their abilities .
Suddenly there is a mountain to be overcome . This mountain means our fears doubts and uncertainty . We believe that we have to conquer this mountain. But it is not so !!!First of all, we are overcoming their fear and uncertainty . If we conquer this mountain or reach any goal we become freedom from fear and doubt . we need to overcome our own feelings first.
our problem or goal in life always seem to us as the highest mountain . Sometimes we can be defeated , but it's not so bad because every defeat makes us stronger . The main thing is that we have to climb the mountain in spite of our failures and difficulties .I believe that his words mean that we should not stop but must continue our ascent up the mountain
I also realized that most individuals would never have any desire to risk their life climbing a mountain!
we all have, figuratively mountains in our daily lives that we sometimes seem insurmountable problems looming large over us. We need to tackle these problems in the same way one trip to the mountains ... one step at a time.I really liked this quote because I found it meaning probably all of our lives .
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    please correct my essay !! theme of my writings (it is not the mountain we conquer but ourselves)

    This saying belongs to the explorer Edmund Hillary . Edmund Hillary was a New Zealand mountaineer and explorer. (I knew Edmund Hilary, my Uncle climbed with him in New Zealand)
    His words make us think. Obviously the mountain represents a challenge in life.
    I think that the meaning of these words is that everyone in life has a problem that he has to solve decide . Everyone is afraid of something or he they just did not lack (same tense) confidencet in their  own abilities .

    This is a long passage ... I'll continue my editing later - now is Dineer time 老鬼

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