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my writing skills are so poor that when i was writing this these words with much worry in my heart was so troubled！ some time i fell Sometimes I feel English is not too hard to master，since /as/cos/for/<which one shall /should i choose / select / elect / use? >i can understand so many sentences even the whole passages in English, .but usually I i find it so difficult more often ！since /as/cos/for/<which one shall /shoud i choose / select / elect / use ?>i because I can't let/make others understand my thinking get my mind well ! and i can't make full use of many words from my mind dictionary ！it always bothers me ！(sentence too long and complex, keep it simple!!!) Why? it is all words that i have mastered my poor vocabulary! I have no idea how to change improve my terrible current situation ! You u know i am man??? who have I am a person with a great ambition ！i really wanna want to be great/ terrific /excellent/perfect/something ! by now i am a college sophomore, but in two years later i am going to graduate ! and then at that time, I will need to chase / build up my good name in society ! i mean my reputation！That is one of the most important things for me in my life ！of course/sure /certainly it will take years of efforts to realize this goal it/make it be true！and i aslo also know i need to be consistent! hum,,,,, To conquer english is the first most important thing i need to do ! ! ！so long ! now i gotta learn must study English ,,,,,,,,,,
Too many sentences starting with conjunctions, usually no full-stop, just a comma - however your sentences run on like a river ...
Punctuation is followed by a space, not preceded by a space.
'I' 我 is written using 大词
English is a proper noun, needs 大词
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