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Hello. I'm Neo. My name is unusual.
I'm freshman in university.
I study English. And I like dancing.
Especially,hip hop.
I want to more speak English very well.
Actually,I can almost speak English now.
But I don't give up. That's all.

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  • Apr 25, 2013
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    Hello. I'm Neo. My name is (somewhat) unusual. 

    I'm in my freshman year at university.

    (OR)

    I'm a fresher at my univeristy.

    I study English and I like dancing.  //Its advisable not to start a sentence with "And"
    Especially, hip hop.                      //Put a space ( ) after comma (,)

     

    I want to more speak English very well.


    Actually, I can almost speak (in) English now.


    **But I don't give up. That's all.

     

    **Not sure what you mean. 諦めたくない = I don't want to give up/ I will never give up.

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