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amazing thing

One day, I got up early this morning with my mother.
Suddenly,my mother found a hen on the fifth floor.
It's so amazing,because the door was close and just on the fifth floor.
I think it is the greatest shock I ever had.

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    One day I got up early this morning along with my mother. 
    Suddenly, my mother found a hen on the fifth floor. //"To our suprise, we found a hen on the fifth floor" sounds better
    It's so amazing, because the door was closed and just that too on the fifth floor. //Alternative Suggestion


    I think it is the greatest shock I have ever had.

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