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今日の天気

今日の天気はとっても美しいだった。 ぼく公園にいった。たくさんな人おった。家族といぬと鳥が全部公園にきた。みなさんは楽しい時間だったと思う。ぼくが歩いてたとおんがく聞いた。四十分ぐらいをした。その後、車で家に帰った。おもしろな日だった。

Today's weather was really pretty so I went to the park. There were so many people there. There were families, dogs and birds that came to the park as well. I think everyone seemed to have a good time. I walked and listened to music. I did this for about 40 minutes. After I was finished, I drove home. It was a really good day.

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    今日の天気

    今日の天気はとっても美しった。 ぼく公園にいった。たくさんいた/おった。家族といぬと鳥がみな公園にきていた。みなさんは(/みんな、)楽しい時間を過ごしたと思う。ぼく歩いて(/歩きながら)おんがく聞いた。四十分ぐらいそれをした(/そうしていた)。その後、車で家に帰った。おもしろ日だった(/本当に良い一日だった)。 


    Today's weather was really pretty so I went to the park. There were so many people there. There were families, dogs and birds that came to the park as well. I think everyone seemed to have a good time. I walked and listened to music. I did this for about 40 minutes. After I was finished, I drove home. It was a really good day.

     

     

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