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Dàjiā hǎo! Zhè shì wǒ dì yī ge xiǎo zuòwén. Wǒ xuéxí zhōngwén liǎng nián, dànshì wǒ de zhōngwén hái bù hǎo. Wǒ liù yuè bān dào táiwān suǒyǐ wǒ xiǎng kuài de jìnbù wǒ de zhōngwén. Wǒ gāngcái kāishǐ xuéxí hànzì, suǒyǐ wǒ kàn dǒngde hànzì bù duō. Xièxiè nǐ de bāngmáng!

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    Nǐ hǎo!

    Dàjiā hǎo! Zhè shì wǒ de dì yī ge pian1(篇)xiǎo zuòwén. Wǒ xuéxí zhōngwén liǎng nián le(了), dànshì wǒ de zhōngwén hái bù hǎo. Wǒ liù yuè jiang1(将) bān dào táiwān, suǒyǐ wǒ xiǎng jin4(尽) kuài de jìnbù ti2gao1(提高) wǒ de zhōngwén. Wǒ gāngcái ("gangcai" means "just now", while "cai" or "gang" means "just") kāishǐ xuéxí hànzì, suǒyǐ wǒ ren4shi(认识)kàn dǒng(though kàn dǒng also makes sense, it doesn't sound very natural here) de hànzì bù duō. Xièxiè nǐ de bāngmáng!

    Nǐ hǎo! 你好

    Dàjiā hǎo! 大家好!Zhè shì wǒ dì yī ge xiǎo zuòwén.这是我第一个小作文, Wǒ xuéxí zhōngwén liǎng nián,我学习中文两年, dànshì wǒ de zhōngwén hái bù hǎo.但是我的中文还不好。 Wǒ liù yuè bān dào táiwān suǒyǐ wǒ xiǎng kuàiyidian(快一点) de jìnbù tigao(提高)wǒ de zhōngwén.我六月要搬到台湾所以我想快一点提高我的中文。 Wǒ gāngcái (gang 刚 not gangcai 刚才)kāishǐ xuéxí hànzì, suǒyǐ wǒ kàn dǒngde hànzì bù duō. 我刚开始学习汉字,所以我看懂的汉字不多。Xièxiè nǐ de bāngmáng!谢谢你的帮忙

     

    Nǐ hǎo!

    Dàjiā hǎo! Zhè shì wǒde dì yī gefen or ci xiǎo zuòwén. Wǒ xuéxí zhōngwén liǎng nián le, dànshì wǒ de zhōngwén hái bù hǎo. Wǒ liù yuè yao bān dào táiwān suǒyǐ wǒ xiǎng jinkuài de jìnbù (tigao, jinbu is a intrasitive verb) wǒ de zhōngwén. Wǒ gāngcái (gang) kāishǐ xuéxí hànzì, suǒyǐ wǒ kàn dǒngde hànzì bù duō. Xièxiè nǐ de bāngmáng!

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