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It was a beautiful sunny day.

 

Now, I want to remember a special day for me.
That day, I was sad and I needed to run, but it was raining and it was too dangerous to run.
So, I decided to walk.
I took my umbrella and I went to the sea which it is one kilometers from my home.
Meanwhile the rain went down.
I was thinking about what happened when I returned on this site
I had had two bad days in my house.
That is the reason why I needed to go out of my house.
When I was walking under the rain,
I realized that I was a great worker and it was very important for me.
For all the people it was a bad day, however,
for me, it was a beautiful sunny day.

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    It was a beautiful sunny day.

    Now, I want to remember a special day for me.
    That day, I was sad and I needed to run, but it was raining and it was too dangerous to run.
    So, I decided to walk.
    I took my umbrella and I went to the sea which it is one a kilometers kilometer from my home.
    Meanwhile the rain went poured down.
    I was thinking about what happened when I returned on this site
    I had had two bad days in my house.
    That is the reason why I needed to go get out of my house.
    When I was walking under the rain,
    I realized that I was a great worker and it was very important for me.
    For all the people everybody it was a bad day, however,
    for me, it was a beautiful sunny day.

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