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The aim of this report is to describe the advantages and disadvantages of the trip on Murder Mystery Weekend that were found by the group of visitors that I joined in. Accommodation: The hotel was very pleasant and well located as it was only about 8 minutes walking from the city centre. The hotel has plenty of facilities, such as a swimming pool and sauna, and rooms looking out onto the main square and the Cathedral. Edinburgh: We were told that Edinburgh was meant to be a fascinating city, and we were not disappointed as there were plenty of things to do. Students appreciated the guided tour made through the city because it allowed them to see the landmarks of the city. Fictional Crime walking tour: Although the walking tour was quite thrilling, it ended up being rather exhausting since it lasted three hours and a half. The tour would have been better if it was shorter (or to make the tour more dynamic by, for instance,) and if drinks were offered in order to allow visitors to regain energy.
Murder Mystery Game: While the walking tour was quite tiring, the Murder Mystery Game was really enjoyable. Students found themselves doing role-play games and dressing up as ghosts or witches. I would strongly suggest to develop (potentiate is scientific) more this game. Journey: Everyone agreed that the main disadvantage of the trip was the journey because it was too long and there were not any stops or night overs. I would definitely recommend doing this journey by air next time as it would be quicker and more economical. Moreover, students would be able to spend more time in Edinburgh.
Forensic crime laboratory: The forensic crime laboratory was believed to have so many rooms that the tour needed more time in order to be able to see all of them. (I don't understand this sentece) Conclusion: To sum up, the trip was very recommendable. However there are some aspects that were need to be changed, especially the journey. I hope this report will be useful to you help and enable you to make some improvements in the weaker areas.
You write well in English, well done!
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