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Access to My Dream

What's your fondest dream?
What do you do for your dream everyday?
I think it's very important not to forget your dream in every moment in your life .
little by little we let our dreams die,sometimes.
we should do even a baby step to access to our dreams every day ,never stop to give our next shoots to the life we want .

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    Access to My Dream (Access有点正式,可以说"Achieving My Dream")

    What's your fondest dream?
    What do you do for your dream every day? (美国人也常常写错的;两句话"every day"是副词,一句话"everyday"是形容词,例如"Everyday life in the US is not like what you see on TV shows.")
    I think it's very important not to forget your dream in every moment in your life.
    Little by little we let our dreams die,sometimes.
    We should do make evenat least a baby step to access toward our dreams every day, and never stop to give taking our next shoots to at the life we want.


    要记得,空格应该是标点以后打的。写得不错。你有什么梦想?我还不知道我的梦想是什么。可能是学好很多语言?哈哈

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