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这是一个美丽的一天

 

The sun is shining brightly
艳阳高照 明亮地

I decided to go for a swim in the lake.
我决定 去游泳 在湖

The water was cold, but refreshing.
水是冷 or 水是冷的 却 or 水凉爽

I saw ducks swimming next to me.
我 鸭子游泳 比邻 余

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    这是一个美丽的一天 (一天 means one day,so needn't use 一个,一个means "one",and if we want to express "one day",we say “一天”not“一个天”)

    The sun is shining brightly
    艳阳高照 明亮地 (艳阳高照 is a set phrase,means sun shine is very good...the weather is very good,we can use 阳光灿烂 or 阳光明媚,is more oral.) 

    I decided to go for a swim in the lake.
    我决定 去游泳 在湖  (我决定去湖里游泳。“在湖” indicate a place,the place is 湖lake,I swim in the lake,so we say "I swim 在湖里",but chinese say "I 在湖里 swim" .And 我决定在湖里游泳 shows a condition,我决定去湖里游泳 shows a activity.)

    The water was cold, but refreshing.
    水是冷 or 水是冷的 却 or 水凉爽 (凉爽 means cold but refreshing,I guess you don't want to express freeze,freeze means 冷!)

    I saw ducks swimming next to me.
    我 鸭子游泳 比邻 余(ancient Chinese)(next to me 在我旁边/附近,next to 在……旁边/附近)(I saw ducks swimming 我看见鸭子们在游泳。ducks means 鸭子们,“们” means plural.)

    I saw ducks swimming next to me.

    我看见鸭子们在我旁边游泳。

    这是一个美丽的一天

    The sun is shining brightly
    艳阳高照  明亮地 (艳阳高照包含明亮的意思)

    I decided to go for a swim in the lake.
    我决定 去湖里游泳 在湖

    The water was cold, but refreshing.
    水是冷 or 水是冷的 却很清爽(提神) or 水凉爽

    I saw ducks swimming next to me.
    看见 鸭子就在我旁边游泳 比邻 余

    这是一个美丽的一天

    The sun is shining brightly
    艳阳高照 明亮地 (阳光明媚的一天。)

    I decided to go for a swim in the lake.
    我决定 去游泳 在湖 (我决定去湖里游泳。)

    The water was cold, but refreshing.
    水是冷 or 水是冷的 却 or 水凉爽 (湖水很凉,但是却很清澈干净。)

    I saw ducks swimming next to me.
    我 鸭子游泳 比邻 余(我看见一群鸭子跟在我的后面。)





    真是美好的一天啊~

     

    这是一个美丽的一天  (在这里,一天 不能用量词“一个”修饰,而且在中文里,一般不用完整的句子做标题。we cannot put the  measure word “一个” in front of“一天”。美丽的一天 means "a beautiful day" , and that in chinese, a  complete sentence isn't usually used as a title )

    The sun is shining brightly
    艳阳高照 明亮地 太阳明亮地照耀着。

    I decided to go for a swim in the lake.
    我决定 去湖里游泳 在湖

    The water was cold, but refreshing.
    水是冷 or 水是冷的 却 or 水凉爽 水有点冷,但却令人舒爽。

    I saw ducks swimming next to me.
    我 鸭子游泳 比邻 余 我看见我的旁边许多鸭子也在游泳。

    这是一个美丽的一天

    The sun is shining brightly
    艳阳高照 明亮地 真是阳光明媚的一天

    I decided to go for a swim in the lake.
    我决定 去游泳 在湖 湖里游泳

    The water was cold, but refreshing.
    水是冷 or 水是冷的 却 or 水凉爽 湖水虽然有点冰冷,但是却令人神清气爽。

    I saw ducks swimming next to me.
    我 鸭子游泳 比邻 余我看到有只鸭子在跟着我游泳

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