I have a dream
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I have a Dream
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I have a dream.__I want to go abroad.__But However, I am no longer young, and my English is very poor.__Although I am learning English everyday, but the progress is really slow. Because I am busy working my work is very busy and I have to look after my two boys. So I don't have much free time. The Time is like water in the sponge, you can have to squeeze it out. extrude them ["Extrude" means to use great force to squeeze something out. In a sponge, it is easily done. "The machine has to extrude enough molten glass to fill the mould"]. I didn't treasure the time when I was young and so now I have to work harder. This my English diary entry. , if you find something wrong, [Sometimes, there is nothing wrong but a more natural way of expressing] Please correct me. Thank you!
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