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Common wishes people have about their lives

Almost every people have a lot of good wishes about their lives. They are not satisfied with all things in their lives. Some people are not satisfied with their appearancies. They are eagar to do plastic surgery to look like much more beatiful if they can afford the high cost. Some people have so many works to do that 24hours a day is not enough for them. They want to add more hours to the day. Some people have so many bad habits that they don't like themselves. They wish to improve their personalities. Some people are so bored with their apartments they are living now. They wish they could move to a new home. Some people are always feeling bad about their lives and they wish to enjor the life more. Some people can't adapt to the society. They realized the life in school was so happy and free. They wish they could go back to school. Yes, almost every people want to change this or that thing in their live and I'm no exception. I also want to change a lot of things in my life. If I'm allowed to choose only two things to change. I think I will choose two things below: First, become healthier. I sometimes feel the pain in my neck. I think that's because I sit in front of the PC too long. I decide to limite the time online. I should go out to walk. The second, improve my english lever. Since I started to learn English when I entered junior high school, it has been 17 years. But I still can't speak English fluently. I am so upset about this thing. I think I'm not hard enough. I need to change.

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    Common wishes people have about their lives

    Almost every people person has have a lots of good wishes about for their lives. However, We They are not satisfied with all things everything in their our lives. Some people are not satisfied with their appearancies. They are eagar to do plastic surgery to look like much more beatiful, if they can afford the high cost. Some people have so many works to do that 24hours a day is not enough for them. Surprisingly, They want to add more hours to the their day. Some people [*add variety to your composition vary how you start sentence* While others,] have so many bad habits that [and?] they don't like themselves. , because They wish to improve their personalities. There are more examples: Some people are so bored [*or* dissatisfied] with their they live now, in apartments they are living now. They and want to wish they could move into a new home.

    Frankly, Some we will always find people who are always feeling bad about their lives and they want to enjor the life more. Some people can't Others may never adapt to the our society. Many remember how They realized the life they were in school, was so happy and carefree. But, we all know we cannot return to a happier timer, or return to those early years in school. They wish they could go back to school.

    Of course Yes, almost every people wants to change somethin in his or her life, big and small. this or that thing in their live and I'm no exception. Because I also want to change a lot of things in my life too. If I'm allowed had an opportunity to choose only two things,  to change. I think I will choose two things below The following are my two choices:

    * First, become make myself healthier. I sometimes feel the a pain in my neck. I suspect think that it's becauseed I by sitting in front of the a PC too long all day long. I am happy to report that I've taken two steps to resolve this. First, I've decided to limite the my time online. Second, I should will make time for myself to go out to walk.

     

    Now, for my second choice, I want to improve my english lever. Since I did started to learn English when I entered was a junior high school, now it" has been 17 years. But Yet, I feel still I'm unable to can't speak English fluently. This one makes me the most upset I am so upset about this thing. I feel like think I'm not I don't try hard enough. I am sharing my resolve with everyone that will support me in achieveing my goal. This I needs to change.

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