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のみもの-----drink

hello how are you
こんにちはおげんきですか

i am fine
わたしげんきです

thankyou for reading
ありがとおによみ

yummy strawberry drink
おいしいのみものいちご

sorry if ther are any mistakes I keep trying to improve any feedback will be greatly apreciated thankyou :)

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    のみもの-----drink

    hello how are you
    こんにちはおげんきですか

    i am fine
    わたしげんきです

    thankyou for reading
    ありがとおによみ → よんでくれてありがとうございます(よんでくださってありがとうございます is more polite.)

    The very direct translation is よむことをありがとうございます but it isn't good nor natural. 

    (To make sentences natural, we sometimes need to add other words, other times we have to change them or get them off.)

    yummy strawberry drink
    おいしいのみものいちご → おいしい いちごの のみもの

    sorry if ther are any mistakes I keep trying to improve any feedback will be greatly apreciated thankyou :)  → Don't worry about it! We are here to study languages. ;)

     

    Hi Tammyads,

    Since your language is very differnt from ours, sometimes remembering whole the sentences without translating each words is good. Please do not forget putting 。at the end of the sentences. Keep up your study! 

     

     

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